HLee_Women's Suffrage_702: Poem:Our Suffrage(Draft)

Friday, May 9, 2008

NOT being able to vote.
NOT being able to speak out.
NOT fair!

JUST being able to stay quiet.
JUST being able to work at home.
JUST unfair!

Ms. Sackstein said...: I want more from this poem. It's very literal. Try to work on using some poetic devices to help improve it.; May 13, 2008 at 7:00 PM
HLEE said...: *******************
I fixed my poem and it is on the top. PLEASE read.
Thank you; May 14, 2008 at 5:10 PM